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A nicer version of the first draft:  Thanks to Jim Hull and Robert Lence, my story is progressing well.  Both said that the story is well on it's way.  Robert suggested having more interactions and reactions, but I think I have to be careful of the time.  Jim thought about cutting the action down to one day, and have LUMI's father find her after she encounter's the wolf...  I think I'll have to do an animatic next to figure out if I need to cut down.  It's looking like a 6 minute film at this point--hopefully not longer.  >o<